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Wed Apr 13, 2011 9:28 am
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"Witness the fury of my fire and burn in agony."


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» Name: Ifrit (but goes mainly by Narumi Hideyoshi)
» Titles: Incarnate of Fire, The Reincarnate, Rumi
» Age: 14
» Gender: Male
» Affiliation/Rank: A team named Akatsuki ran by the one and only Nagato, the Sage of Six Paths.

» Shifter Appearance Written:

Narumi blends in with the teenagers of this world, however something special roams about him. His short hair is raven black but shows shades of green when the light deliberately reflects upon it. His face obviously proves his young age because he possesses a babyface; small nose, large green eyes and full lips. He has an unusual tattoo on his left collarbone radiating with demonic energy when his anger explodes.

His figure is lean, thin but muscular. If anything, he has the body of a swimmer (which is ironic because he relies on fire more than anything). He has bronze skin from being under the sun. He is seen shirtless in battles because that is his battle attire. It consists of a pair of brown gauntlets with golden trims that cover up the arm. His pants are looser than most trousers in the universe, making his movement and mobility and swifter. They are plain white with the design of fire crawling from the bottom. Over that is supposedly a coat that compliments the pants but it's just seen as an accessory to it, being wrapped around by a karate black belt. His neck is surrounded by a golden necklace with a ruby gem carved in the center. Yes, he wears no shoes.

His casual appearance would be just a... an outfit. He always tries to match his outfit somehow, though.

His eyes go orange and his hair converts into a charcoal black color when his emotions overtake him. Sometimes, even a long pointy tail may spawn out of him. It sharp enough to cut metallic objects and strong enough to break bones upon one swing.

» Shifter Appearance Picture:

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» True Appearance: It is unknown whether he's already in his true form or he's in his shifter form. People believes one or the other based on their own observations.

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» Personality:

Narumi is portrayed as to being a very childish teenager. He is rebellious toward superiors and simply does not obey orders if it crosses over his morality code. Although, this does not mean that he's always seen as immature since he can be serious and adult-like sometimes.


» Likes: Sweets, not just food either. He likes sweet people who actually cares. And, finally, FIRE.

» Dislikes: Water & Ice, obviously... grief, death..
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≡ History Three paragraph minimum of your characters history; also include how they became a demon via birth or they were changed to one though a deal est.
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» Natural Abilities:

Immunity to Fire: His most notable ability is his large resistance to fire or anything that relates to it. He is practically not able to be damaged by the force of flames. This has gotten to the extremity where he will simply deflect the flames with his bare body and remain undamaged.

Master Hand-to-Hand Combatant: He had a natural talent for fighting in a simple way with his fist and feet. His acrobatic movements allow him to perform even the most inhumane stunts, making most normal humans gape in awe. He's pretty much on par with the Gotei 13's 2nd division captain (which specializes greatly in hand-to-hand combat). This makes him a worthy opponent when you feel like dabbling with your body itself a bit.

Immense Spiritual Power: Being a reincarnation of a renowned demon, Narumi possesses a large amount of spiritual power. He is able to unleash a massive amount of it to repel enemies around him or simply to give off a warning. When his anger explodes, the force of it is uncontrollable that it even goes to the level of being decimating.

Enormous Strength: Narumi is capable of causing tremendous amount of damage with his strength despite being so little in size. It is highly suspected that he has the power due to his relation with the demon, Ifrit. His muscle prowess is pretty high, able to destroy buildings with just a thrust of a fist or a simple sweep with his leg. He is also capable of hitting the opponent or enemy from a range without the usage of ranged-combat specialized weapons. The force of the wind that blows from his movement is enough to reach them. He can easily make dents to the strongest metal in the whole spiritual universe.

High Intelligence: Despite being a demon with the appearance of a child... he has the smarts. He knows calculus if that makes any difference.

High Speed: Narumi doesn't rely on speed as much as he depends upon his strength, but he is still able to keep up with average captain-level beings. He's not fast enough to cause afterimages or dodge the fast people's attack, but he substitutes this for more strength, often blocking it over evading it.

» Unique Abilities:

Ifrit's Blessing: His attacks are enhanced by large amounts of flame, easily inflicting third degree burns on contact. It is also demonic, making it possible to run through hierro-like abilities with no difficulties. This is a passive ability so it is bound to happen during his attacks as it is permanent. Though, he is still most likely able to use just his normal fist and feet when he wants to.

Fire Manipulation: Narumi's most prominently used ability would be the use of creating fire from nothing and simply swinging them around for his advantage. He is able to rain massive flames down from the sky with just a snap of a finger. During an emotional, dramatic, or the simple live-or-die moment, his fire would light up more intensely to the point where its color resembles the color of blood.

-Heat Manipulation: He is able to control and adjust the heat of his fire. A sub-power of his fire manipulation, basically.

-Lava Manipulation: Narumi is capable of using lava within the surface of Earth.

Magnetic Force Manipulation: Now, this is what makes him dangerous. His control over the magnetic force can cause some highly disastrous events. He will target a designated area and increase the force of gravity around that area to render the opponent useless. For example, if he doubles the gravity force, the enemies will move slower twice of their actual speed. Just pretend they're running at an impressive six hundred miles per second, if this is cast, they will run at a halved three hundred miles per second. Do you get the drift? Only one area can be targeted at once. The force of the gravity may be increased to how far he wants it to go, but the condition is that he suffers from the gravitational manipulation as well. He can only move easier than the opponent because of his strength.

Guillotine Fist: By charging up a perfect amount of heat and fire into his arms without attacking, he is able to thrust his fist and shoot out an image of Ifrit's hand itself which is big as a Skyscraper. Upon contact, it will explode in the shape of a pillar made with pure flames. The impact is strong enough to create a large crater on the surface (big enough so that lava can be seen spewing out in the center of it).

Ring of Fire: A ritualistic magical circle will appear on the surface, spinning a few times rapidly before it comes to a stop. As soon as it stops, fire starts to pour our around the circle (just not in the circle). This is most likely a restraining ability, trying to prevent enemies from running away or getting out of the field until a plan to deal with them has been formed. This is possibly to dodge or get away from, but may depend on the speed of the opponent since the size of the circle is adjustable to his own leisure.

Napalm Punches: One thrust, five punches from an unknown source. It's not that special. Unfortunately, it can not be enhanced with fire when using this.

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» Note: This form only lasts for a short amount of time.

» Ifrit Form Appearance:

This form alters his general appearance. He will grow tanned horns on his forehead that curls like a ram's. His eyes glow in a fierce blood red, burning with actual flames. His canine becomes more beast-like, resembling a fang. His outfit turns a bit more blacker from the original white color. His hands and feet will be like a dragon's, large and ready to claw down anything that stands in his way. They are still capable of being used like normal fists and feet.

His torso is shown with small crevasses, leaking with steamy lava.

» Adjustable State Benefits:

World-Shaking Spiritual Power: His spiritual power immensely increases, perhaps even double his normal power. However, he is unable to control this and may hurt himself somehow from an outburst of it. The spiritual power is so vast that it leaks out from him in the form of lava. It can also be shown as an image of a lion's face (even the sound of its roar resonating).

Benefits: His strength, speed, endurance and basic stamina increases very much. He can move around faster while retaining a good amount of strength.
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Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Demon Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Shadow Movement: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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Wed Apr 13, 2011 10:33 am
Unfinished apps need to stay in WIP until they are complete. Therefore, moved to WIP.


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Sun Apr 17, 2011 11:58 am
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Comments/Notes: Just a few problems that can easily be cleared up or fixed.

Sun's Glory: Narumi can form a duplicate of the sun in his hands and shoot it out toward an opponent to create a massive explosion that completely engulf a whole city easily. This technique is highly powerful and will be rarely used by him as he doesn't like to use this ability unless it's really necessary.

This technique kind of bothers me. Forming a duplicate of the sun would take insane amounts of energy, even if you put it in your hands. Instead, could you possibly create some type of intense flames or something else instead? I would also like a one or two post waiting period until he can have enough energy to do so. I'd also like it on a smaller scale until I am able to find out which tier I will place him on.

Thana's Smite: A half-body of Thanatos, a known God of the fire will sprout out from the ground with his transparent body with a fiery blade in its hand. It will smack the opponent with superfast sonic speed with the strength of an actual god, able to change the landscape magnificently. But this technique can only be used once in a battle and he must recuperates before he uses it again.

I don't mind you having a symbolized version of this move, but an actual god would be difficult, if not impossible to do on a battle field. I'd also tone down the Super Sonic Speed and strength of an actual god.

Everything else I'm fine with
Tier: Between 2-1 to 1-3 when changes are made.


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Fri Apr 22, 2011 11:10 am
Done, I suppose!
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Thu May 12, 2011 1:42 pm
Everything I asked has been fixed, therefore I will be approving your app 2-1+


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Tue Jun 21, 2011 11:39 pm
Bumping to 1-1+ for joining K-World


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Sat Dec 03, 2011 7:59 pm
Archived.


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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