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Narku
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[::AZALE-URI::]

Azale Uri [APPROVED, 2-1] RedHead

" No way I'm I gonna let you Boss me around. You're gonna HEAR all I got to say."

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General Information
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Name: Azale Uri
Appearance Age: Late Teens
True Age: 240
Gender: Male
Reiatsu Color:Brillant Yellow
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Overall Apperance
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Appearance:
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Personality
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Personality:

HyperActive: He is shown to be very energetic when it comes to him and world. He never looks towards anything with complete despair or hopelessness. Most of the time he smiles at things that gives other pain but only to reassure.

Loyal: He has a great deal of loyalty to does that deserve it. Azael never tells a person he has loyalty to them, but it becomes obvious if they ever need his help, He would rush to their side to protect them.

Stubborn: He tends to keep himself from being overpowered mentally by anyone. Even if they were right, he despise being thought of as dumb or idiotic. He would claim his answer was right to his grave.

Love: Azael is very clear with his emotions for women. If he likes you then he likes you. But if he don't then he'll make it clear that their only friends. He never had anyone that he's truly love but has had lust or infatuation towards other girls.

Battle:When in battle he tries to enjoy it. Though sometimes he can be a little to excited, he does try to hold back. Though he dislikes it if it's unnecessary or over something stupid. It's not hard to get him serious about actually fighting, just threaten his friends or family. It's something he doesn't tolerate in the least.

Annoying: Some people find his endless energy to be annoying. Though most tends to just live it with. It's not hard to understand though why people would consider it annoying. It's like having a restless puppy with you all the time.

Warm Aura: It's been said that Azael has a strong personic aura around him. He's been called warm and understanding but most of all, people tend to feel safe around him. Even if the outcome doesn't look to bright for him.

Lazy: Once entering the Gotei 13 he became a little lazy. Not really interested in the work that was being tossed on him. He would constantly duck and dodge his work. Most of the time being caught at the academy laid back on the roof.

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Zanpukto
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Zanpakutō Name: Tsubasa Ōji (Winged Prince)

Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance:
Spoiler:

Inner World: The world within Azale is very much like a golden city in the sky. Filled with thin wispy clouds that surrounds the golden cities behind them. The main streams from the city fall into a ocean below. Yellow rays of light shoot up from the open cylinder buildings into the sky causing it to rain golden sparkles down from the sky constantly.

Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: Azale carries a melee-type Zanpakutō. In seal form it resembles a regular katana with an extended golden handle with a long linked charm hanging from the end of the hilt. The guard is in the shape of a spiraled galaxy. The length of the blade is slightly longer than most but only by 1 or 2 inches.

Release Phrase: Come From The Heavens With Golden Punishment - TSUBASA OJI !!!

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Shikai Information
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Shikai Appearance: Much like that of Sajin Komamura's , Azale's shikai is that of a disembodied spirit. Though it's much more visible and physical than the captain's. He gains a golden shoulder guard on his left arm and what ever he does with his seal Zan the shikai sword mimics. This arm is very much maneuverable for it intangibly moves through Azale's body to defend if need be. It's quite durable in the fact that it can take a point blank cero with little harm done to it's golden arm. From behind Azale you will notice many shadow threads appear behind him.
Spoiler:

Shikai Abilities:

Divine Canyon: The spirit's sword is stabbed into the earth than slashed towards the opponent. Releasing an intense amount of spirit energy towards them. It is capable of destroying a large building with little trouble at all. The reshi energy is shaped into of a large shark fin with variations in height. It can cover up to several miles before it dissipates into the sky.

Meteor Fire: Tsubasa Oji fires a small particle beam towards the sky. Then moments later brilliant beams targeted towards the opponent comes from the skys above. This techniques accuracy is dead on, but it take 3 posts to happen. A array of around 10 thin beams are shot from the sky, it has the ability to destroy moderate size houses and groups. If shot around a crowded every from a high place it could kill many people. Then again he can also aim all 10 beams onto one target. This is all done by his will.

Gigas Kannon: Azael points the golden blade towards his opponent and gathers a large amount of reshi at it's tip. It usual has the potential destructive power of a beginning level Gran rey cero. Shining a brilliant yellow color it carries while speckles along the wave. It around the same size of school bus, but it be extended even wider if forced reshi is applied.

Full Armament Mode: In this form the spirit gains his right hand, along with large golden wings that can thrust him forwards at startling speeds. It should be noted that Azael's cheek begin to have a small amber colored crystalline grid work going down his cheek to his neck. His strength is increased due to the sudden release of spiritual reshi. The grid pattern is only the material form of the strain the of spiritual energy going on inside him.

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Bankai Information
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Bankai Appearance: Azael gains two reshi swords and a long cloth that extends from his waist to his feet. Many sharp pins are stabbed into the cloth and his hair grows a little. His bankai is more or less the full manifestation of his shikai. It's becomes many times larger than it shikai state around 40 stories tall. The two spirit swords act as the connector to the giant swords above. The sword in the middle is the full manifestation of his bankai. It can only be drawn upon once he fuses the two spirit blades into one. The giant behind him would then drop the other two and pick it up. It has the potential power to create a continent size crater in the earth. This monster is considered to be an powerful weapon in the soul society.
Spoiler:

Bankai Release Phrase: Bankai! Tsubasa Oji Shishio; Place Judgement

Bankai Abilities:

Cross Decision: The giant slices the two blades individually towards his opponent in a the fashion of an X. Sending highly pressurized spirit energy towards it's opponent. This monster of an attack is extremely large in radius. It can easily take out a square block in a city. The attack area of the X is sears and left with partial spirit energy sparking form the area.

Divine Pierce: The giant's sword is thrust in any direction. It a certainty that anything below the thrust area would be devastated with but a powerful force of impact and pressurize air continues onward from the pure power projected from his blast. It can easily destroy the summit of a mountain with his size and strength. If it hits it's target it could probably push back a 0-3 in strength.

Final Judgement: When the final sword is brought from the giants harness a great brilliant energy is released into the atmosphere. The gaint takes the two blades and toss it in opposite directions, creating a strong divine barrier all. Canceling out any effort of escape. This act as away to limit the total destruction it can casue. Once the giant blade is brought down the entire area is engulf in a catastrophic amount of destructive energy. It can be thought of as a last ditch effort. For after this is used his bankai isn't allow to be used for 3 complete threads. Afterwards he goes complete comatose while he regains his spiritual energy. Thanks to the hollow inside and it's vast energy, he doesn't die. It can harm even 0-3 enemies.

Celestial Orb He gathers a large marble like orb in his hand and slams it into the ground. Creating a large 8.0 earthquake within the area. It can be very destructive in terms of environmental damage. This is more of an army damaging technique. If he every goes against a giant army of opponent's this would be one of several go to moves.

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Hollow Infected Bankai Information
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Hollow Infected Bankai Appearance: Unlike most Vizard Azale carries an infected bankai stage to an addition to his own. Though neither can be used during the same thread. It's much more agile than the giants split soul of himself. More humanoid than the original Bankai he has, it's more versatile and in himself he becomes the beast. No controller, he himself is the controller, he is his Bankai. All in all it could probably stop a meteor from impacting the earth. It's carries a large clever like blade that holds a golden handle, it resembles his original katana except for the blade. The beast attacks on instinct, almost beastile it moves in unpredictable ways and can jump several times higher than his own height. Running at speeds far exceeding that of any other sized beings. When at max speeds he can cause sonic booms from him passing by.
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Hollow Infected Bankai Abilities:

Irrelevant Source: The immense power in the golden sword is placed in the two storage's on the shoulder pads. That destructive power is split and made into a power source for irrelevant blasts. He claps his hands together and when they spread apart his hands is covered with golden energy. He can just about make them into any form of blast his hand can swing. It strong enough to slash many buildings into a clean cut.

Absolute Terror Field: He is capable of summoning a barrier between him and any opposing force he chooses. It usual in the shape of many inwards push circles shaping into a large lance. When attacked it pushes out into a circle, depending on the strength of the opponent. It also has the capabilities to be used as an enhancement for his irrelevant source power. Though this take about 2 posts, when fired through the arc it's capable of living a large crater and engulfing any opponent.

Sword TransFer Arm: The divine sword that is seen in the cast of the bankai above is all transfered into this beast left arm. The arm looks like golden spirit energy from the shoulder down and is capable of firing off a maximum of 5 powerful bursts of power. Though where as it had the possibility to stop a meteor from impacting it's now a certainty that it could stop a meteor from impacting just with this one arm. If not using the 5 bursts of strong energy then it's capable of producing a narrow large halo around his head and with his hand held out towards his opponent he lets loose a piercing long beam of energy. Once it impacts something the impacting radius is drastically increased in the sense of if the small beam was to hit a skyscraper it would probably destroy all or it or half of it depending on the pin point area it hit.

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Inner Hollow & Mask
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Inner Hollow Description:
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Inner Hollow Personality:

Resentment: The hollow inside resents Azael for confining him in his inner world. His goal is too kill Azael's will and become king of his world (take over his body) It craves the destruction of the boy but only by his hands. He refuses to let him die by other means.

Sly: It has a very clever and sneaky personality. Much like a snake he tends to have alternative motive for everything he does. He's words most of the time sounds as if he joking, but it's obvious he's serious when he says thing like " You shouldn't slip up Azael... I might rip your skull in half.. Heheh "

Instinctive Fighter: Like most Hollows he fights off of pure instinct. Azael always dreads when confronted with fighting him, It's almost a certain that he'll come out mortally wounded. In terms of skill, this guy is superior than Azael.

Ruthless: He has no remorse for anyone he's fighting. Always looking for the weakest points to attack. It's not like fighting a shinigami at all, if given the chance he will kill anyone.

Features: The most distinctive features of Hollow Azael is his snake like eyes and his wide grin. It haunt Azael to an extent to think something like that lives inside him. His echoing hollow like voice only adds to the horrifying way he speaks. Like a jokester his laugh is just as psychotic and maniacal.

Inner Hollow Powers:

Master Swordsmen: Hollow Azael has advance skills in handling a Zanpaktou. It wouldn't be wrong to say that he was much more skilled than Azael. Considering he uses the abilities in much more versatile and destructive ways. Such as using the giant golds spirit's sword as projectile than summoning it back just as quick to attack with. He attacks in a berserk manner. Not caring for who is hurt, just as long as his target is killed.

Perceptive Combatant: Hollow Azael tends to be highly adaptive during combat. Being capable of just entering a fight and perfectly countering the moves of his opponent. It may seem that the guy is mocking and arrogant but it he does has vast skills and it shouldn't be forgotten.

Immense Spiritual Power: Hollow Azael has immense spiritual powers, much stronger than that of Azael himself. Because of this it's thought that Azael power fluctuates from weak to strong. His growth rate is much quicker than that of Azael quickly catching on to his own techniques and custom moves.

Hollow TakeOver: If Azael ever falls in battle,it would be capable of taking possession of his body or if he is damage mentally extensively.

Enhanced Abilities : He has incredibly immense abilities. His strength, speed, and durability is all amazing. Being able to take a cero to his body and continue to fight without no hesitation. Capable of throwing a person through a building and flash step quickly from point A to point B almost as quickly as an advanced user . He has a very distinctive way of moving much like a hollow he is unpredictable and quick.

Hollow Mask Appearance:
A flat, narrow skull like mask with dual large horns coming at either ends above the eyes , with smaller horns on the inside of the forehead of the mask. The eyes are slanted to reveal only the hollow like eyes that comes with the transformation. It has a menacing grimace with jagged teeth, that rips open when he yells or speaks. His voice is hollow like with an echo. It has small griffon wings that slightly wraps around Azaels ears. His iris is kept red but his scalera and pupil are black. Two thick blue lines skies up from the eyes and onto the large horns and goes down towards his teeth and lower jaws.
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Vizard Powers
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Vizard Powers:

Vizard Mask: The physical manifestation of a shinigami's control over their hollow. Like most Vizard, Azael has become capable of astonishing feats. As the power inside fuse, he becomes far stronger than any shinigami or hollow could be. He has a rather rare occurrence being able to keep his own for an extensive long amount of time.

Cero: The hollow inside present Azale with the ability to use Cero. He usually uses it by placing both his hands to the center of his chest and pushes it outwards. The crimson hollow like energy than forms to one place than shot out towards his opponent.

Brilliant Cero: Much like a grand rey cero in power. The color is black with a white outline and bright particles surrounding it. It sears anything that comes within a 10 foot radius. It has a strong energy that can cut metals and destroy buildings with little effort. It forms much like his regular Cero except the color.

Brutal Fighting Abilities: He fights much more aggressive than usual. Being the one to attack first and rush his opponents. He would rather end it quickly while he can than let it drag on due to the mask time limit. If he doesn't talk to you then excuse him, he just doesn't have the time.

Enhance Speed
Enhance Strength
Enhance Durability
Enhance Spiritual Pressure
Enhance Stamia

Hollow Form:
Spoiler:

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Resurrección
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Resurrección Appearance: TBA

Resurrección Abilities: TBA

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History
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Background:
:: Life Before The Death ::
Azael's human life was more or less boring. He was born with the type of spiritual energy that hollows fed on. With this came the ability to see ghosts, though unlike some others he was very much creep out by this. Most of the time he simply ignored their presence. When he was younger he was always picked on about his large eyes and unusual hair. But he eventually grew into them and became what most would call a pretty boy.

It was known by many that his father was a member of a large criminal organization. While in school his father was eventually killed and to make sure that his criminal org was ended for good. They killed and hunted the immediate families of the members. It wasn't until later that night, did Azael actually find out his father and mother was killed. Afters he ran, he was eventually hunted down and shot down in cold blood.

:: A New Life, Soul Reapers Forever::
After his death he was born in the rukon district. It wasn't long until his already high spiritual pressure was beginning to multiply due to the spiritual energy in the air. Afterwards he was found by the Gotei's research department. While not entirely sure of what happen, it was clear to him that he was put through the hollowficaton process under the supervision of shinigamis. He remembers going through intense pain and a type of vomiting then unconsciousness.

Afterwards he was inducted into the 6th squad of the gotei thirteenth. He was placed as a member not initially remembering the experiments conducted on him. He lived a pretty secluded life in the soul society not really drawing attention to himself unless scheduled for a field mission. Which is where he truly begin to realize the horrors of the experiments conducted on him.

While out on a mission one day, he begin to realize that he was being surrounded. When confronting them, he noticed they looked alot like stealth officers. They attempted to eliminate him away from the squad and eventually over powered the unseated officer. They disposed of his body and as he laid their in his blood he begin to here a voice echo at him " This is sad.. guess I'll have to handle it" Suddenly the muffled sounds of screams and running footsteps could be heard. Then a bright light showed through as he enter the world of the living once more.

:: A Vizard. What I'm I ?::
It was awhile after the previous events and his eyes had finally been opened. His severe wounds had been healed and he felt a strong spiritual power inside that was different then before. In his 200 something years in the Gotei he learned a very useful technique called jinzen. It was the best way to take a look inside yourself and communicate with Tsubasa Oji. The confrontation was one of terrifying proportions. He expected to meet Tsubasa and only saw a different being. It was a grimly experience for sure, he attacked without cause and almost took over. Azael wasn't really sure about the lesson learned but he barely won and that was enough for him.

Years later the boy begin to conflict with the hollow all the time it was becoming a true hassle. Until he met another veteran Vizard. He explained the whole situation about what he was. The hollowfication process , the inner conflict and the mask. They trained vigorously until he gain a good amount control over the hollow. Once again, years go by and he begins to search for the next problem that awaits him. His goal is too to take revenge on the soul society for the experimentation's done to him.
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RP Sample
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Role Play Sample: (This is to test where your level of role playing is at. Please paste or create an example how you role play if this is your first app on the site. If this is not your first APPROVED app, then please remove this section of the app.)

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Skill Sheet
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General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner



Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Cero/Bala/Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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Application Checklist
  • Name [x]
  • Appropriate Age [x]
  • Gender [x]
  • Appearance Present [x]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  • 10 sentences for personality [x]
  • History is of appropriate length [x]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
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  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]


Comments/Notes: Everything is fine but the detail of the powers is too little. Please look at how others detail their powers. Yours lack quite a bit in comparison TBH. Also, you dont start with Bankai so.
Tier: 2-2+ When fixed
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I've come reclaim his heated soul. It's time to scorch the heart of those around you.
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Mon Sep 10, 2012 8:51 pm
Yo, yo yo yo yo.

Bro, you need a will sheet, yo.

Here's one for ya.

Willpower/Determination: Advanced
Mental Deduction: Beginner
Pain Tolerance: Adept
Focus: Beginner




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Tue Sep 11, 2012 3:01 pm
Will Sheet huh ? And here I thought I was caught up.
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Tue Sep 11, 2012 7:12 pm
I'ma have to ask you to change the Hollow Infected Bankai appearance.
I have it reserved.


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