Yuanjia the Demon

Fri Apr 22, 2011 5:27 pm

[ DEMON ]

+ B A S I C I N F O +

Name: Yuanjia
Age: looks 29, but truely 1855
Gender:Male

Shifter Appearance: Yuanjia the Demon Other-lubu2-1

True Appearance: same as shifter
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+ P E R S O N A L I T Y +

Personality: Yuanjia is typically depicted as an extremely aggressive, brutish, and bloodthirsty demon warrior who fights for the sole purpose of finding an opponent worthy of challenge. He believes that he can rule his race; he strongly believe "Only the strong will live and the weak are crushed". The smell of blood encourages him to fight hard agaisnt his opponets. He is described as a ruthless and impulsive warrior who has no sense of loyalty and sympathy.

One thing about him that wouldn't brutal, is his weakness if any, are women. To some women, he wouldn't seem to be himself. As if he was human, Yuanjia shows kind heart warmming feelings towards them. but if betrayed, he would use them his at advantage, and makes sure their plans will fail.

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+ B A C K G R O U N D +

History The story began when was born into a time of war on 156 AD. At a young age he was never intrested in politics and his everyday studies. when he was 13, he began his trainning with his halberg/spear. His father would be very harsh on him to make him change from young kind boy to ruthless general. And soon Yuanjia was one of the greatest warriors of his home land.

At age 18 winning battle after battle and war after war. Yuanjia's would still look down at him as a weak boy. One day at 19, he challeged his father one on one fight. He quickly defeat and murdered his old father with his symbolic halberd. his skill with his weapon was encredible and stood very tall over everyone at 6'10".

As quicky that he rise in power and military ranking. his mind for conquer began to have a downfall. he lived very unhealthy for a warlord. drinking and spenting most his time with women. Yuanjia became very pale and fraile looking. then his cities were ambushed and was tricked into burning his cities by a demon pretending to be a gerneral of a near by country. the demon offered Yuanjia to take his place and have his power or forever continue to lose his cities. Yuanjia desided to take the demon's place.
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+ P O W E R S +

Natural Abilities: "Bōru Shi: Bōru Shi is a massive burst of destructive energy a demon can unleash if they have Adept or higher on Za Koa. It starts by gathering energy from Za Koa, The Demon's Blood and any type of darkness. From there, it will form into a ball of darkness that can be used to unleash serious damage upon anything it hits; Resulting in a black explosion. And thanks to Demon Spells, there are multiple varieties, advanced and powerful versions of this move."

Unique Abilities: His attacks are quicker in mid. air but only in shadow areas or nighttime

Shishi Mōdo Appearance: Yuanjia's left arm will break his left arm armor and become stronger and surrounded by a dark abyss. not much will change physically, his eyes are a crimson red, but not glowing. he would have a tail similar to a monkey's tail.

Shishi Mōdo Abilities: his left arm is able to block to oppoents attack like a sheild for 1-2 posts with cooldown for 2 posts. the opponet would also recive blur sight for 1-2 post with cooldown 3post

Satsugai Tsūru: He would get the weapon of the demon that he made a deal with (double voulge that can sperate into 2 spears and big prayer beads around his neck that slightly and grautualy increase Za Koa for 3 post but only used once per battle.

Mukō Jōtai Appearance: pretty much the same as Shishi modo but Yuanjia's eyes are glowing red.

Mukō Jōtai Ablities: He would have a wide range and massive rate of damage for 3post cooldown of 3 post.

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+R P S A M P L E +

Role Play Sample: An brutish acient warrior on arrives at strange forest with an agressive grin. His black armor with crimson trim had a thin sent of blood to it. almost as if he had continuosly slaughter his enemies. quickly he notices a pressure of energy near by and spoke loud and strongly,

"Show youself!! it's unless too hide from your death!!"

thinking quickly Yuanjia charges towards the energy pressure and a devstating thrust with his halberg.

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+ S K I L L S H E E T +

(DO NOT FILL THESE OUT UNTIL TIER IS GIVEN!!!!)

Racial Skills

Za Koa Manipulation: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Spells/Summonings: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Jigoku Sokudo Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

General Skills

Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Fri Apr 22, 2011 5:32 pm

Application Checklist

Name [x]
Appropriate Age [x]
Gender [x]
Appearance Present [x]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
10 sentences for personality [o]
History is of appropriate length [o]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]
Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [o]

Comments/Notes: Everything that isnt X'd is in too much low detail for sure. YOu need to add more detail to his powers, his history/personality. Thats the only way ill accept this. Fix it please..
Tier: Lack of detail prevents me from properly tiering this char..

Sat Apr 23, 2011 4:32 pm

Locked + Moved to denied because of loss of interest in RP.

Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:23 pm

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