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Welcome to The Platinum Hearts Scroller. Here you can find our most recent Of the Year and Of the Season winners. Happy Roleplaying! --- Member of the Year: Locke --- Character of the Year: Alastair Eisfluch --- New Characters of the Year: Mizu Morikawa and Igendai Gyakusuma --- Social Thread of the Year: A Letter for Hymn --- Combat Thread of the Year: Raise Your Spirits --- Member of the Season: Paradigm --- Characters of the Season: Byakuya Kuchiki and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Applications of the Season: Armina Willsaam and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Fight Thread of the Season: Search and Destroy --- Social Thread of the Season: Damage Assessment --- Event Thread of the Season: Midnight Assault
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masorin
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Fri Jun 10, 2011 6:37 pm
S H I N I G A M I

B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: Jace Tsumi
Gender: Male
Age: 400
Appearance:
Spoiler:

Jace stands a short 5”3’ looking in his late teens. His hair is white and eyes are kind blue. Normally he is waring his shinigami robes, but on missions to earth that require the use of a gigai he has black jeans and a black jacket lined with a fake fur. His white hair looks oddly silver under direct moonlight.
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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality: Part of a noble family Jace remembers his manners well, he is polite and kind. Though many who know him will know that Jace seems lazy when it comes to paper work even in the academy he always seemed to manage to get others to do his paperwork. he has a slight silver tongue able to speak his lies and often get away with it, and because of his reliance on it he has gained a poker face that can be difficult to read.

Jace doesn't hold much close to him he is bitter about his family and feels betrayed by his sister. he does not trust easily deciding that its better to coast on lies then tell the truth. This is a policy that has gotten him into trouble in the past, and one that will continue to do so in the future. earning his trust would be difficult after all if his own blood has gone against him then the random people of the world will most likely follow suit. because of this he has few if no friends.

Jace is a manipulator when it comes to the female gender, often he will act sensitive to their needs to make himself seem trust worthy, but 10\10 times this has been a ploy to get into there pants. When it comes to the female gender he will lie, he will manipulate, and he will and has even dated more then one woman at a time. He is only a player, he has never nor will he ever cross into rape or sex crimes.

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B A C K G R O U N D

History/Background: the Tsumi family is a lesser noble family, and it holds very little power outside of its large estate. It’s a family that earned its place in soul society over 5 generations ago, but in that time the family has faded from view. It clings to life in only its land. and in most days it is quickly becoming the laughing stock of the noble society. dispite this members of the Tsumi family do have a comfortable life even if there power and money has faded over the years.

Jace was born to the Tsumi family, and because of this his raising was soft on him. He had much free time and afforded luxury but because of this he was spoiled from a young age and didn’t quite understand that his family was a fading memory.

His family was dying away in power and money its estate was all that really afforded him luxury as the land was large and well kept. From a young age Jace showed many signs that he was one of the unique often complaining of hunger when most of his family only ever ate for luxury it was apparent the small child had potential, but this potential was always squandered. Jace liked his easy life enjoyed coasting on what power and money his family could afford him, and he enjoyed the life style of the noble.

It was for this reason that he and his father often came to heads. His father knew that if the estate was left to someone as careless as Jace the family would fade completely into obscurity, and so it was that it came to pass that Jace was passed over in inheritance so that the estate power and money landed on his sister Chandra, even though she was younger.

Jace was betrayed and although he was allowed to live on the estate by his sister, but allowed is not the same thing as welcomed and Jace found himself often at arms with his family, eventually to the point that Jace was left with a choice become a commoner stripped of name and ties to his family, or sign up with the shinigami and make some use out of himself.

Betrayed and with little to no money and no choice he did what he had to and signed the contract to enroll into the academy. The training of which took several years, it was exhausting and tedious work but thanks to his nobility living with a silver spoon had given him a silver tongue, and so it came to pass that Jace became a member of the shinigami.
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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Lethe
Appearance:
Spoiler:

Lethe is a giant cat beautiful as she is deadly she prowls threw Jaces mind. She has a bright orange pelt and stands at Jaces waist. This is the form that she uses the most when she appears to jace.

Spoiler:

Her human form retains her feline qualities and adds a tail and ears to an otherwise human form. This is the other form of her though she doesn’t like it, here she stands at 5”8’ and is nimble and quick. This form is the one she uses to actually train jace in the use of weapons.

Her personality is that of a mentor always looking down on jace with the malice as if she knows she an irresponsible student. She does not hate him but rather does not approve of him yet he has not yet earned her respect and so she has not yet yelled her name holding her tongue until the twat of a student earns his place, but in many ways she helps out and guides her pathetic student.

Inner World:
Spoiler:

A forest untainted it remains in summer at all times but it is always silent no birds no life aside from the plants its quite save for Lethe’s and Jace’s constant bickering.
Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance:
Spoiler:

A single strait edge ninjaken. Its length is about 4” long.

Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: the sword has been covered in a couple of aromatic oils that are designed to disorient people with a strong scent of smell. (this was partly to piss off Lethe) they also have the tendency of burning in the presence of fire meaning that his swords blade can be set a flame.

PhatomTech: N/A


Release: (What you have to say in order to release into Shikai. Try to be original please!)

Shikai Description: (Your character or your sword's new appearance)

Shikai Abilities: (What are the abilities your Shikai has? Do not overpower your shikai.)


Bankai Description: (This does not apply until you learn Bankai)

Bankai Abilities: (This does not apply until you learn Bankai)

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R P S A M P L E

Roleplay Sample: The following rp sample was taken from my FF site as short lived as it was:

Jace picked up his wallet from where it landed after the kid became deepfried. but then as he watched a new person emerge from the audiance she cured the adolescent. he shrugged his shoulders a white mage. she then talked about how he had lightning eyes, and that was where he was immediatly lost.

Black and white magic are often called the two sides of the coin even if its impossible to use them both at the same time *save for the occasional redmage* you at least had to hear of the other side. so for the black mage to be confronted about having lightning eyes it was just odd espically after seeing her cure a child. "Um it has nothing to do with my eyes. My eyes burn yellow because of an access of arcane energies, it comes with the territory of being a black mage."

There was a little bit more to it in all honesty. His eyes burned under the shadows of his hat. his face well hidden against the shadows cast by his robes. and the length of his coat hidding the majority of his flesh. there was no doubt that he was a black mage, but his eyes didn't burn yellow becouse of dealings with arcane demons, like many others of his path. they burned yellow due to a birth mark, and had 'glowed' yellow since the day he was born.

His original parent had never told him the story about it, but his viera mother had explained that many black mages held contracts with other worlds some contracts altered the soul of the person, and by extension the eyes of the person. it was the reason that his vierian mother had taken him in. the way she had explained it he had the eyes but none of the taint. of course that explination was too long so he allowed others to buy into his 'holding' of a contract. "The boy you just cured was a thief he tried to make off with my wallet a moment ago, I taught him a lession by calling down some lighting... how can you be a white mage and not know about black magic?"

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S K I L L S H E E T

{Please do not fill out the following until your character has a tier}

General Skills
  • Durability:Beginner
  • General Speed: Beginner
  • Strength: Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Adept


Racial Skills
  • Hoho:Beginner
  • Kidou:Beginner
  • Zanjutsu:Adept
  • Hakuda: Beginner



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Fri Jun 10, 2011 7:14 pm
Jace Tsumi Amber_light_300

You did fine in all departments, great for your first app but your personality is too short. We need 10 sentences here, you ahve 5.

Ill help you.

Think about how his history could affect his personality? His likes and dislikes? Etc.
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Fri Jun 10, 2011 7:28 pm
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Sat Jun 11, 2011 1:22 pm
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Jace Tsumi 232?cb=20170319214106
    MaidInAmn
  • Plays as [?-?] Jiyūna Seishin
  • Roleplayer
  • Gamer
  • Writer
  • Employed Full-Time
  • Zodiac: Earth Dragon
    (Year 1988)
  • Sign: The Virgin
    (6th of September)
  • Blood Type: B-Negative
"I took roleplaying and storytelling with a live-and-let-live attitude, thus the idea of a character doing something out-of-character would add more to the character than letting it stagnate into an archetype or a character. Here: A rapid change to a character must be met with an in-the-moment conflict. Ta-da! A rule to live by!"
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