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Sat Mar 18, 2023 8:29 pm
» Name Of Acosador
Character:
Tento Zefa
» Link To Character:
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t23421-spirit-class-7-hazard-d-tento-zefa#162199

» Upgrading: none,just officially creating

» Why: He is a vizard and I figured out what/how I wanted his inner hollow to start out as/work. (Also, inner hollow came out in a thread he was in that I didn’t expect so I figured reeeaaallly need to get it done now.

» Extra: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t22757-what-is-your-name-tento-s-shikai#166521
Continuing from this conversation and attempt. As stated at the end I will use these thoughts and feedback to try and create the concept for abilities.

I. Vizard Information


» Inner Hollow Name: Acosador


» Inner Hollow Description:

Acosador looks like a tall, well-built muscular man with an obsidian black color covering of his full body makes it hard to tell if he has hair or not. He has a pointed face and sharp pointed teeth that he keeps restrained, causing his teeth to appear normal to the naked eye. At times he wears black clothing common among the Gothic or hardcore type. Usually commemorated with a black leather jacket with a white fur-collar and a pair of sunglasses, or a red and black coat. His body is a mix of two colors, the base being the deep pitch black common throughout his body. But the top is patterned in white/silver lines that make up a decorated look of African pendants, while the bottom half of his body is dressed in red lines that make up the design of what one would assume is Indigenous symbols. Once he absorbs power and stores it within his body, the two sections of lines expand, run all over his body and are expanded all over his face, crossing his eyes.

» Inner Hollow Personality: A twisted version of Tento. Acosador is everything Tento is and more. Arrogant when prideful, calculative when thoughtful, obsessive when passionate, and, lustful when lustful. All sides of Tento but with no or little restraint. Where Tento fights to grow or for fun. He fights to conquer and rule. While Tento holds himself in high esteem, he is arrogant and a bit self centered. While Tento tries to consider people's deeper selves, he tries to USE people's inner self. And while Tento ogles at a lot of women, he would rather… you get the drift.

He has what can come off as a demanding and nettlesome personality, but also somehow is very polite, laid-back, chivalrous, and enthusiastic. He never lies, he just leaves out information. He offers bargains to gain what he wants and he acts in an extremely friendly (though sarcastic) way even towards foes.


» Inner Hollow Powers:

(Impact absorption / conversion):

While most inner hollows have a straightforward boost of power and speed to their host, or improve their spiritual energy or endurance. This inner hollow has an unique ability in addition to what a normal hollow would have. This hollow has the ability to change its skin to a hardened external shell from which it can further increase the durability and strength by focusing rishi and kishi into its body. Resulting in an iron steel defense or sharpened fingernail blades depending on which the hollow switches to. By absorbing blows it can handle by physical force or spiritual force; it is stored as ‘potential’ energy within its body to later be unleashed as ‘kinetic’ energy. When unreleased it can increase physical strikes or increase the power of energy based assaults such as ceros.

(Energy conversion)
However, it does not end there with the Hollow’s skill of its ability. For just as it can use this stored energy to empower its melee attacks or special attacks such as a cero, it can increase other physical capabilities, but such an effort causes a continuous steady drain of its stored power and damages the fibers of its body. Causing an increased time for healing after battle.

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» Vizard Powers: Donning the hollow mask gives a general assumption of abilities of a vizard; an increase in spiritual energy, physical strength, durability, and speed. As well as the typical gaining of hollow abilities such as Ceros/bala, regeneration in Acosador's case, acid secretion etc. However, in addition to these donning the hollow mask also gives :

(Impact absorption): When he has his mask on, Tento acquires the ability to absorb blows to his body to store as kishi/rishi starting at power augmentation adept with the amount of force he can withhold is equal to his spirit class and can stay in his body before being lost or potentially hurting him. This skill is based on and scales with power augmentation. This is esthetically shown by the lines that the inner hollow has showing up on Tento's body in a purple glow as well as pendants glowing in the same color along Tento's collar 4 total in number representing an symbol for the amount of energy stored. Use of each level storage of power functions as doubling the power of whatever attack Tento unleases. However he must be careful of using too much, as use of power beyond doubling the strike can have a recoil effect on his body.

Adept- able to handle up to spirit class, 2 post duration.

Advanced- able to handle up to one level above spirit class, 3 post duration.

Elite - able to handle up to two level beyond spirit class, 4 post duration.

(Ultimate Shield):

When he has his mask on, Tento may use the energy to acquire a strong aura of raistu armor beyond one could have from simply empowering their body with their own spiritual energy. This boosts his durability that functions in a similar way to a stacked Arrancars' haido would due to the exerted spiritual pressure and physical change. Making it harder to physically damage him and make some attacks hell to damage him with ie. stabbing/slashing. This is only active when energy is currently stored within Tento's body.

This physical resistance only applies to things that impact his body. Weapons, punches, kido, burns, elemental attacks etc. Poisons, diseases, and mental attacks occur as normal with his base durability and mental abilities. Also, this ability is not as effective against foes with a massive difference of energy to him. Finding less success against people with two or more spirit class differences against him. For people of this level, fhd damage is felt in full as normal just without a physical sign of impacting his body.


(Ultimate sword):


A use of the energy story to converse into an offensive assault following the principles of the Hollow’s abilities. When he has his mask on, Tento may use the energy to acquire a strong aura of raistu armor that boosts his strength or kido depending on the way he is attacked. This refers to the amount of power he can unleash and not his ability (this does not allow Tento to use kido or other attacks he normally wouldn't be able to do). Instead of the energy forming on his body acting on a shield, it expands as an external force. Coating his hands and arms and his Zanpatuko if he is wielding it. He can even unleash a burst of this force to push and damage foes back. This has a toll on Tento's body and can only be used so much before he is a threat to himself. Resulting in his endurance to fall by one level through over use.

Adept- one time use per thread

Advanced- two time use per thread

Elite - three time use per thread

Saving Roll: Once per thread, Tento is able to manifest his hollow mask somewhere on his body. It has an durability equal to its power augmentation and is on Tento's spirit to do this, his spirit views it only as a means of self-preservation to save its own skin as well as a refusal to lose due to its massive pride.



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Hollow powers:

-Impact Absorption/conversion
I would like to see some mor information on how this occurs. Is the energy storage a perfect 1:1? If you absorb 3 punches, can you fire a punch at 3x the strength of that punch? Whats the cap on the storage? The strength and potential of this ability means it should have well defined parameters, as it can essentially function as damage reflect with a lot of potential. As such, I'm going to need to know what the conversion rate is for taking hits (He should take some form of damage, otherwise this is just damage immunity), and a Cap on how much energy he can store.

For energy conversion, this feels just like stat boosting. How much does this boost his abilities? What physical capabilities can he boost? By how much? How much does taking a punch to the face allow you to increase say your speed?
This will tie in with the constraints asked for in the first section. How much energy does he get from any particular hit in comparison to the strike, and how does that convert to these boosts?

Vizard powers:
-Impact absorption
These durations will need to be adjusted, vizard masks don't last more than a couple posts even at higher levels, but these durations more or less exactly match what the vizard mask duration would be at these levels, and so they don't really serve much if they're intended to be drawbacks as they would have 100% uptime.. ( You can reference https://www.platinumhearts.net/t23167-vizard-race-specs for the duration of Vizard Mask use). Similar to the Hollow version of this ability, I'll want to see drawbacks, a cap on how much energy can be absorbed from any particular hit (It mentions that he wouldn't be hurt until a certain threshold is met, but doesn't really specify what that threshold is. Also, even the first thing that hits him should still do some fraction of the damage it should have done, otherwise this is damage immunity), as well as a proper scale. You mention that this ability scales off Power Augmentation, but then in the second section, it seems that the constraints for what he can absorb are based on spirit class, so a bit of clarification for what role power augmentation plays would be helpful.

Ultimate sword: The number of uses seems a bit high for an Ultimate attack. I would like to know if this would just be an attack using all of the stored energy (in which case it seems like just an extension of how

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